Talking wind

Cover a multitude of them,
But underneath the night sky
Each star illuminates the greatest flaws.
Even the good intentions with poor
Planning, panting at the tip of
His cup waiting for life to start.

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2 thoughts on “Talking wind

  1. I feel like this should be written like this:

    Even the good intentions with poor planning,
    Panting at the tip of his cup
    Waiting for life to start.

    That’s just me though. Incidentally, I adore the above lines. Really different and expressive.

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